I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, March 21, 2019
six -sentence story
This week in writing we wrote a six-sentence story about creating a character and adding detail. Our fows was on creating sentence. We learnt that the four critena of a sentence are that a sentence must make sense and your sentence has to have a space( ) next to each word and last but not least the fourth one is that you have to have a capital letter at the start of your sentence and a full stop at the end. The thing I thought was challenging was writing it
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Hello isbella my name is kahu from south hornby school and i really like how you put emojis at the end and nice writting-
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Hi it is Isabella thank for the complementing on my blog kahu
DeleteHi Isabella, Miss Goslin here, thanks for posting your six sentence story. Your story is very funny I enjoyed reading it. Next time I would like you to add more detail to your sentences.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to hearing back from you.
Miss Goslin
thanks Miss Goslin for complementing on my blog
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